India v/s Bangladesh
India taking on Bangladesh, the first match of ICC cricket world cup 2011.It was held in Mirpur {Shere Bangla stadium}. India has won the toss and elected to bat first. I was really happy. Then both countries national anthem was sung. Sehwag and Sachin were the openers of team India. Sehwag was playing fiercely. After sometime when Sachin was playing on28.He was run out. Then Gambhir came to the crease. He gave more chances to Sehwag as he was playing freely.Gambhir was out. Then came Kohli. He was clearing the boundaries and Sehwag was hitting sixes.Sehwag scored 175 and was out. India scored 370.Bangladeshi openers Tamim Iqbal and Imrul Kayes. Kayes gave a good start but Kayes was out. Many batsmen came but no one was in form. But still they tried there best. Man of the match was Sehwag because of his hard work
Hi There!
ReplyDeleteNice blog posts. But wouldn't it be better to break up the text into paragraphs and sections?
For instance, you can start with the team that batted first and write about the highlights.
You can then start the next section on the team that batted second. Both sections can have multiple paragraphs.
I think that would make the posts read more like stories and make them more interesting and reader friendly!
Overall, I like the way you have talked about the matches, one after the other.
Good job! Keep posting more!!!
Thanks for your advice and I will follow it. Please view the other blogs also. I will be happy to know your name.
ReplyDeleteYours faithfully
Siddhant Verma
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Hi Siddhant,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations for a great blog. Looks like you are getting some nice comments and feedback too!
The suggestions made by the other reader are all very nice. They will make your blog look better. Remember to make the headlines bold and in larger font.
I am enjoying reading your blog. Its making the matches come alive again for me!
Keep writing and happy blogging!
All the best
Antara